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Padfoot and Lucius

The Last Battle has been fought, and Harry Potter has won. The price, however, has been high. Nearly every person Harry cared for is dead, maimed, or otherwise injured. The magical culture of ...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure - Characters: Dumbledore, Harry, Lucius, Lupin, Moody, Sirius - Warnings: [!!] [?] - Published: 2006/05/06 - Updated: 2006/05/06 - 3157 words

Reviews

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2006-09-08 06:40:44 AM

  Good one. Looking good so far.
  
  gunny

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) james 2006-11-19 10:14:20 AM

  erm....the chapter is called padfoot and lucius but lucius is barely mentioned

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) Cho_Fleur_Nymphadora 2012-05-13 08:41:52 AM

  Seems like a poor deal: Dobby in exchange for a lot of concessions.

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) Cassandra30 2012-06-27 05:30:40 AM

  He should have kept the Tapestry. it belongs with the Head of House. He should also reinstate Andi then he would have an excuse for Tonks and Remus to meet.

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) agnar14 2013-03-04 04:11:10 AM

  I know it's pointless since the fic is long past complete, but I didn't really get or agree with all the thing sirius is giving up to the malfoys here.
  
  He's giving up his relationship with his own godson, not even being there for his BIRTHDAY, for time with the worthless little shit draco. He's giving up making draco co-heir, which translates as giving half the black estate to voldemort.
  
  None of this makes sense, was all that crap in exchange for dobby? If so, sirius/harry got screwed, they could have given up waaay less.
  
  It reads like a deal fucking dumbledore would make, give tons of stuff to the malfoys all on the tiny chance that maybe draco can be 'saved'.
  
  It's bullshit. Even if it's some scheme to get the diary, I don't get it. Hell harry knows where the stash of dark artifacts is, and in the other timeline arthur raided malfoy manor. So give the tip early, provide the location to the stash, likely get the diary AND cost malfoy some money.

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) noylj 2013-03-27 10:24:12 PM

  I agree with the above.
  Also:
  If all horcruces are destroyed, the wraith should pass on (no anchors--it floats away)
  Then, not about this story, but why does the locket need to be opened to destroy it? This makes less sense then most of JKs other crap.

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