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Voldemort's First Return

The Last Battle has been fought, and Harry Potter has won. The price, however, has been high. Nearly every person Harry cared for is dead, maimed, or otherwise injured. The magical culture of ...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure - Characters: Dumbledore, Harry, Hermione, Lucius, Lupin, Moody, Quirinus Quirrell, Sirius, Voldemort - Warnings: [!!] [?] [V] - Published: 2006/05/06 - Updated: 2006/05/06 - 3303 words

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• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) JBern 2006-05-06 02:20:25 PM

  A pretty strong chapter, but I guess the admins at the other site are a tad to stringent. I don't see that it was that objectionable.
  
  Very good work. The story of Quirrell has never really been told.
  
  Jim

  Author's response

  Yes, if I had gone into detail about the death of the girl, it would have been an obvious R, but that part doesn't bother me. It's just too bad the chapters got messed up there.
  
  "T"

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) loralee1 2006-05-06 02:56:56 PM

  Thanks for posting here. It was a little frustrating this morning to read chpt 9 and not know what had happened in this chpt. :)
  
  Great story looking forward to more.

  Author's response

  Yes, that's what pushed me into finally posting on another site, and this seemed like a good choice.
  
  "T"

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) lunny4urwrittings 2006-05-06 04:28:29 PM

  Oh god. SO Voldemort is back and he's stronger now... or his bond with Quirrell is stronger than it was in the other life. Urgh, that's horrible! This means that it will be little [who am I kiddin? ALOT] more difficult to destroy him. You say you will wrie this maybe untill third year, so I take it that you will make it possible for Hary to destroy him now. The question is, what will it take?
  I trusted Voldemort to do somethink sick and twisted to bond with Quirrell, but I dedn't expect what he did. Poor girl. I wish that on noone. I hope [even if she is a muggle] that she comes back and haunts Voldie for some time. But that monster is impossible to scare!
  GREAT CHAPTER! Too bad FA didn't post it there.
  ~lunny

  Author's response

  Well, that's Voldie's hope, anyway; and yes, Voldemort & the sorcerer are sick and twisted, but I'll deal with them, sooner or later.
  
  "T"

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2006-09-08 10:27:16 AM

  Good chapter.
  
  gunny

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) noylj 2011-03-04 12:32:02 AM

  Why would the idiot Bumbles still keep Dark Lord bait in a school full of children?
  Has Harry or any sane person asked him?
  Has Harry considered contacting Nick and see if he agrees that the stone SHOULD be in a school full of children while a dark lord tries to steal it?
  Why isn't the stone under a Fidelious with Nick as secret keeper?
  Personally, I would put it under the Fedelious and make some new born baby the secret keeper.

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) noylj 2011-03-04 12:35:43 AM

  Forgot...
  Why hasn't Harry contacted Luna? We NEED Luna and her sight. Can Luna and her mother live this time?
  Has Harry realized what a waste of space MoRon is yet?
  Will Quirrelmort and what was Ginnymort get to meet each other? Maybe bond?
  Bumbles is still sitting around with his thumb up his arse...has he even started the great horcrux hunt or is he going to be the egotistical demented person he was in canon?
  

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) Cassandra30 2012-06-27 06:38:20 AM

  That was a sickening thing to do. But it does explain a lot. Excellent!

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