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Original Sin

by devilsgyrl 3 Reviews

Narcissa is a little first-year and Lucius is a third-year. This is the story of how their love came to be.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Romance - Characters: Narcissa - Warnings: [!] - Chapters: 63 - Published: 2010/10/18 - Updated: 2010/12/18 - 143032 words


  • Original Sin

    (#) ImNotRomeo 2010-11-25 02:41:09 PM

    I tried the first few chapters, and I have to agree with whomever is rating your fic. OOC as hell and not very entertaining at all.

    Author's response

    That's alright if you didn't like it...what do you think makes is OOC though?
  • Original Sin

    (#) scottyxdoesntxknow 2010-11-29 03:55:47 PM

    shut the hell up ImNotRomeo. You know I think it's really funny how all the hate reviewers have no stories posted of their own.

    This a very good fic and I'm really sorry that HP writers on here are such assholes. Don't let this discourage you and keep on writing.

    xo Aria.

    Author's response

    Lol, I kind of find that funny too. :P But aw, thanks so much! That's so kind of you to say that. :) I really appreciate your review.
  • Original Sin

    (#) keegan 2010-11-29 09:51:29 PM

    Says the MCR writer. Constructive not destructive, what? Practice what you preach, idiot.

    From what I've gathered in your fic so far, it is a bit boring in many areas, and in other others, I don't see well-bred pure-bloods acting, interacting, or committing some of the various indiscretions the way they do. Just an observation that will probably be shot down by the hypocrite up there.

    Author's response

    Well, the pure-bloods are still at school and are at a young age (11-18), so they shouldn't really bet committing indiscretions yet. And what parts would you consider boring?

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