Categories > Original > Drama
- I liked this, but I had to read it twice before I really understood it. It's a little confusing, and I think it would've been more clear why she hated Christmas if you showed more of the bad events that had happened on Christmas. I think this idea really has potential, but it needs work :)
Author's responseI did orginally show the evert tat happened to her but it was 400 word of boring-ness, to be honest. I don't actually like this story much, I really only put it on here so that one of my friends could read it.
anyways, thankies for the review
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