Categories > Anime/Manga > Hikaru no Go

The Fan

by denwenwolf 3 Reviews

To play, you need two. Hikaru joins the Honinbo League, Akira sees him change. Akira/Hikaru.

Category: Hikaru no Go - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama, Romance - Characters: Akira, Hikaru - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2006/05/12 - Updated: 2006/05/13 - 2162 words - Complete

Reviews

  • The Fan

    (#) tsukiyuuki 2006-06-11 10:05:53 AM

    This was wonderful; I loved the idea of Hikaru feeling he needed to "borrow" Akira's go, and then reverting back to his own. I'd never seen something like that before, and it was refreshing.

    Your writing is excellent, and the characterization was spot-on-- even the OOC when Hikaru was "being" Akira was believable, so it wasn't actually OOC at all. You did a great jobs with Hikaru's dialogue, too; I find a lot of authors end up writing Hikaru's dialogue as stilted or overly child-like, but you did great.

    I also couldn't help but notice the date at the end of the story-- now Hikaru will have a happy memory for that day, not just a sad one. Yay! ^_^
  • The Fan

    (#) Wings 2007-02-21 09:03:03 PM

    Wow, this is a great fanfic! The way Hikaru wanted to 'be like Touya,' wow. The one thing I really liked was how you wrote Touya - his feelings and wants really seemed real. Great work!
  • The Fan

    (#) scarecrowqueen 2012-06-19 08:54:06 PM

    I liked this! Poor Touya, so confused! It was god, had nice pacing and good characterization.

Log in!




Register Lost password

Filter

You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0

 

Featured Story

Site Stats

  • Authors: 649346
  • Stories: 39927

Recent Stories