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Chapter Nine

Frank's having a bad day...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2010/12/25 - Updated: 2010/12/25 - 1266 words

Reviews

• High School

  (#) alligatorpie 2010-12-25 10:38:20 AM

  I love it! You're really capturing the awkwardness of falling for your best friend. When I fell for one of my friends, even though she and I are both bi, she had a boyfriend. I kept hanging out with her, and noticing all the little things she does, like how she leans back on her hands when she's smoking, but not when she's not smoking, and the exact color of her eyes, and the way she smiles, and on and on and on, and I kept awkwardly mentioning things, then mentally slapping myself. ANYWAY, now that we're done with that trip down memory lane...
  
  I love this story, and I think you should update it... right now.
  
  xxAnna

  Author's response

  thanks :D i love putting in the tiny details of falling for someone- it makes writing about it so much more interesting and realistic. i totally loved writing this story- its probs my fave i've written- even though it's my first frerard. i'll update tomorrow if i can :)
  lucy xo

• High School

  (#) bobington 2010-12-25 12:05:36 PM

  I was about the say the same thing.
  The little details really make a difference. I've also fallen for my best friend... It wasn't easy ¬.¬
  I wanna know why Frankie rushed off so soon >.>
  I hope all goes well at the movie with Ray-Ray The afroman.
  Should be intresting ^_^
  Great job, dude. ~XO

• High School

  (#) CosmicZombie 2010-12-25 12:17:21 PM

  thank yoou :D i know, falling for your best friend is never easy- it's happened to me too :/ next chapetr should be up tomorrow :)
  lucy xo

• High School

  (#) i_bleed_neon 2010-12-26 03:44:29 PM

  AWE. Poor Frankie. :( I really wish Gerard would just hug him already. That would surely brighten Frank's day. :) Anyway, loved this one and I am sorry (again) that I am late on reviewing but better late then never, right? :)
  
  
  xo britt

  Author's response

  haha totally- thank you :)

• High School

  (#) zombieyeti 2010-12-28 07:18:17 AM

  you called the PE teacher Mr Morgan? how very creative of you smurf :p but i think you could have done a better job of bringing him across like the sadist basterd he is :D good job and keep it up i guess?

• High School

  (#) xxMloewxx 2010-12-28 10:13:05 AM

  Loooove it! :D
  I'm still wondering when they find out they both like each other! :P
  And I can imagine that it isn't easy falling in love with your friend!
  
  

• High School

  (#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-01-02 12:01:20 PM

  oh my i have been busy lately that i havn't checked to see if you have updated, and you have yay, i have loads of chapters to read now >.<
  
  and omg i hate P.E and press ups lol, i hate it cuz we have to all get dressed and the room is tiny, anyway...
  
  i really love this chapter and gerards line at the bottom, has made it so clear he likes frank aww :)
  Off to read more

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