Drawing lines, in more ways than none. Seto and a failed intellectual exercise. Warning: slashcest.
(#) exdee 2006-05-16
There are many things to say about this story, but I can't find them. Seto's sane insanity and the loves he has and the way he needs to keep them even when he has to break what they mean to him ... aargh. So Seto. The imagery is great.
In the long silence that follows, Seto can hear himself breaking.
That's an excellent sentence, one that breaks my heart.
And the theme of the lines-- /their mouths intersect in a kiss/-- that's really cool. ^^
Squee! Thanks for the feedback. At first I was worried it was too thematic, but then I thought, "Aw, hell, it's a _drabble_."
Fantastic, just... WOW. He has never been able to deny Mokuba anything, even if it costs him his sanity/soul.
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