not thinking before you speak, choking Mikeys and awkward silences.
getting crap? I think your stories just getting good! i mean i liked it before, but it just keeps getting better :)
keep writing! :)
i've just noticed some crappy errors, but ficwad is being stupid and won't let me edit it :/ where it says "noting how much Bee mees to come out of her shell" it was meant to be "Seems" really sorry, guys :/
awwww i love it, aww gee thinking aboy frankie >.<
starting to reallly like this :) btw bee is such a cute name :)
keep writing i wuuuuuuvvvvvvv it
(#) AstroSkull 2011-02-06 07:03:56 PM
This story is NOT getting crappy or is crappy, I love this story! :D
Its really good, and I dont mind the slowness, I like how things between Gerard and Frankie are slow, and not just getting to the climax quickly.
Update soon! :)
OH MY GOODNESS.
This. Is. AMAZING!!! :D
Please update soon! Very soon! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!! :D
(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-03-17 06:37:21 PM
I laughed hard at the point where Mikey brings up the Cat incident... And it's good that Mikey likes Bee. I thought for a moment there this story wasn't a Ferard and was going to be a Bard
(#) emocutter91 2011-05-11 03:54:29 PM
yeah, since I'm about halfway through catching up, I decided to review:
And I'm excited about getting to spend a bit longer catching up before I have to worry about waiting impatiently for updates, so for now, I can read this in ALL my spare time:)
Keep it up! Xoxo
awww, thank you :D glad you like it! thank you so much for reviewing, and i'll try and update soon :)