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Changing the Routine

by birgitriddle 1 Reviews

Complaints about Professor Crane's teaching style leads him to change it a bit.

Category: Batman - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama - Characters: Other - Published: 2006/05/17 - Updated: 2006/05/17 - 474 words - Complete

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  • Changing the Routine

    (#) Mercy 2006-05-27 01:13:51 PM

    It took a long time to get going. Would be better if you started with Jonathan Crane talking to himself because that's where it got more interesting. The previous opening paragraphs felt like a warm-up. I hope the hook at the end is intended to lead into another chapter because this doesn't read as a oneshot.

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