- It was pretty good. I can't wait till it is updated. Archie needs some Atlanta-lovin'.
Author's responseThanks, sorry it tookme so long to respond to this i just did'nt know how to and i sorta told myself that i would respond to every reviw i got... Thank again
- I liked it. Capture-the-flag style training would work well, I think, considering how many times they end up going in to rescue someone. One thing I might suggest is adding more scene dividers; you have one separating the two capture-the-flag parts, but none distinguishing between the Peter and first capture-the-flag part.
I'll keep an eye on this... It looks interesting. And it helps that I'm a sucker for all things A/A. (Heh. I just read that over and now it seems like I'm a fan of alcoholics anon.)
Author's responsewhoops, my bad i was supposed to add a scene divider between peter and capture the flag... thanks for letting me know!!!
Thanxs- Paige (princessofoyownworld)
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