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Fragmented

'They are parts of a circle.' Yoruichi, Urahara, Kaien, Kuukaku and Byakuya are friends. Even though they might not see each other much any more.

Category: Bleach - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor - Characters: Kuchiki Byakuya, Other - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2006/05/18 - Updated: 2006/05/18 - 1756 words - Complete

Reviews

• Fragmented

  (#) oztan 2006-12-04 08:09:55 AM

  this is also really good.

• Fragmented

  (#) Kamaitachi 2007-03-11 11:33:12 PM

  Wow, this story is wonderful! I'm not sure what else to say about it...There's so much emotion in this story; I chuckled, smiled, sighed, frowned, and was over all moved by your great story. Excellent conveyance of the feelings and emotions of the characters.
  A couple grammatical errors here and there, but not too noticeable unless you're rather nitpicky like me, and I'm sure there are errors in my review, so I can't nag too much about the mistakes. :)
  A well-written and thought-provoking story. Good job!

• Fragmented

  (#) Lilac_Ravine 2008-10-30 12:57:00 AM

  Awesome way of weaving in the missing pieces from the heirs of the "Four Great Noble Houses". Great insight to include Kaien and Kuukaku. Also the lack of a convenient ending, nice touch!

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