I've put it as PG because I'm not sure how it's gonna go. (: it's one of those cliche stories where frank is a pupil and gerard is a teacher. Read on, my little vampires..
- You know what, I don't think you have the RIGHT to critizise my work, just because you are so horribly bad at writing yourself. Does flaming people make you feel important? Well, you're not.
Author's responseYeah, I'm really sorry about that. I didn't mean to be so harsh about it.
- To annabel-lee:
'How dare you say that'? Really? You're actually going to tell me what to do over the Internet? Why do you even think you can do that?
Well, Patrickisthesex DID kind of ask for flaming -- literally -- when she left this "review" on my story.
O_O I Gotta Agree With MCR-overload This isn't good...at ALL. If you wanna go hate on my story now, GO AHEAD! I'll be waiting :)
How is THIS not hating on someone's story? It's FLAMING. There's NO helpful concrit.
"If you wanna go hate on my story now, GO AHEAD! I'll be waiting :)"
She literally gave me the opportunity to flame her. I am merely taking that opportunity.
"Just because someone doesn't like yours doesn't mean you should hate on their's."
I love the use of good and bad connotations here. She didn't 'not like' it, she also flamed. She doesn't have any more right to do that than me.
Author's responseHi. I'm seriously really sorry on how mean that review was. I didn't mean it to be that mean, I truly didn't. I was actually just going to write something like "I don't really like this story so I have to agree with mcr-overload." But I'm really sorry it's just I'd had an argument with my mum and I was really upset. I didn't mean to take it out on your story.