Ch1 Beta'd and revised. The morning after Dumbledore left Harry on the Dursley's doorstep didn't go quite as well as he hoped. Someone else noticed Harry first. Now follow along as the Boy-Who-Live...
(#) hammerhead 2011-03-10 09:50:26 PMGreat start you have here, I hope to see more of it soon and to see what your female lead does to screw up Dumbles plans. Thanks for sharing.
Author's responseWell I have a beta looking over any mistakes for the first chapter, but I have chapter 2 half way done. Thanks for the review and hopefully you like how I plan to change little Harry's life.
- I like it, especially the detailed descriptions. I can't wait to read more.
Author's responseI have chapter 2 half way done and the first is being beta'd but I couldn't wait to post it lol. Glad you like it so far and hopefully you'll enjoy what I do next. :)
- A very interesting start with some great descriptions and interest-catching items. I'm very much looking forward to the next few chapters to see just how much matters get screwed up for Albus' plans and to see how many other events get "tweaked" before Harry even arrives at Hogwarts (if he, indeed, goes there; I can see good reason he very well might not).