Really liked it apart from one bit, "or emo’s like me" this bit bugs me, because 1) he would never call himself that and 2) i hate steryptypes but if you don't mind them then cool, im just saying my opinion.
Yeah, I know he'd never call himself that and I hate stereotypes too, they annoy the hell out of me.
I put that in becase the other day my friend said 'oh yeah I'm leaving school to get home schooled!' And I was just lie 'That's awesome!'.
But now I'm the only person in our whole year who is an 'emo' and to top it all off, I'm the only bi one as well, which isn't really new, but now I'm completely hating it because the only other friend I have in my class isn't really cool with the whole bi thing and has a bad habit of using it against me and threatening to tell my homophobic parents =/
Thanks for the review, it really helped.