(#) akeala1089 2011-10-15I'd just like to say, I really like this story. I started reading it in computer class at school, and I couldn't stop. I read all you have posted. Last night, I stayed up all night, excited, thinking "What's going to happen next?" The story was really good but you should keep writing forever. I didn't get some of the slang but I'm just a stupid American. Yeech. I hope you write some more, about Bee and Mikey too! Cat should suddeny appear...sorry I can't spell really well and the computer keeps spell checking. I'm going to have to kill this thing...Anyway, I think I've seen worse stories published and you should keep going on this one, it has lovely dynamics. I do agree it should have more chapters, if that's not obvious. But judging by how long ago the last post was, I'm not sure there'll be any more. I hope there will!
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