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Chapter One

by razz 4 Reviews

16 years ago the Potters' faked their sons death, hiding him at an orphanage in France to save him from the prophecy. But when the effects of a thirty year war prove too much for the world, the sea...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Drama, Erotica - Characters: Harry, James, Peter - Warnings: [?] [X] - Published: 2006/05/22 - Updated: 2006/05/22 - 4664 words

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  • The Lost Fate

    (#) darksider 2006-05-22 08:04:46 AM

    Good chapter
  • The Lost Fate

    (#) Dark_Mage 2006-05-22 02:15:02 PM

    I was abit creeped by the use of drugs. I hate it when Harry becomes an addict of some sort. Anyway the chapter was well written but I just hope that he isn't a complete jerk, isn't a womaniser like guy and cuts back on the drugs. You could still make him really rebelious without them
    Good writing though
    Dark_Mage
  • The Lost Fate

    (#) tillantria 2006-05-31 07:35:32 PM

    A fun read this one is... and odd.

    AP
  • The Lost Fate

    (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-06-12 08:03:14 AM

    Ah, I always thought it was spelled Louis. It doesn't matter.

    Anyway, good story. I like the initial parallel between Harry and Voldemort, although I like the deviation even more. Looking forward to seeing what you do with this fic.

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