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Top Broom
3 ReviewsWhat if Top Gear reviewed Brooms? Omake for 'Letters' on FF.net but since it's down, I'm posting it here.
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Top Broom
(#) twilliams1797 2011-04-14 07:51:46 PM
I wrote a story called Top Broom as well, but I like your much much better.
I believe you have captured the essence of Top Gear and it's presenters.
thank you for the fun story
TimW
here's the link if you are interested
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4670838/19/Story_fragments_and_piecesAuthor's response
This is the first review I've gotten on the story from the FicWad site.
Thank you for your comments, and I will be looking at your story as well.
Thanks again,
Rick -
Top Broom
(#) doghtree 2011-04-17 12:39:14 AM
The format of this fic is the kind of format that makes me not like something right off. As such I didn't even read or rate it. Try putting it into a #rd person POV and you'll get a lot more ratings/reviewsAuthor's response
This story is written to represent something like a TV shooting script - not something that would be in first person. Watch a few episodes of 'Top Gear' on YouTube or Hulu and I hope you'll see what I mean.
If you don't like the format, don't read it. But thanks for the review.
rdgale -
Top Broom
(#) Drawoh_Ecnerwal 2012-03-30 04:04:51 AM
As a fan of the television program you have hit the nail on the head. I could actually see in my mind the cast doing just what was written (maybe you could submit it to them and see what comes of it)Author's response
Howard,
It's been so long since I've logged on to this site, I forgot I had even posted it here.
Thanks for the review and the kind words. As far as if Jeremy and Company would ever do it? I think I'm about 2 years too late. Maybe for a 10th anniversary or something, but I'm sure there is someone on that side of the pond that has done a much better job then this.
Again, thank you for your review. You made my day.
rdgale