Hermione and the rest of the wizarding world discovers Harry's disappearance, as Gnarl and his Minions eagerly await for Harry's slumber to end.
- I'm liking the story so far, despite being unfamiliar with the crossover material (can you provide a title/author?). Personally, I prefer longer chapters, but short chapters won't push me away (unless the update rate becomes REALLY slow).
Author's responseOverlord is actually a game for the PS3, not a book. Basically you play as the bad guy, and subdue the forces of good to establish your Dark Domain. It's a very exhilarating and welcome change from always being the good guy.
(#) DrummerBoy4Life 2011-05-06 05:20:04 PMThis story is good so far. The chapter length is okay and the character and plot devolpment has been done well.
It is also nice to see a different idea coming forward, many people would not think of cross over like this.
It will be interesting to see how you develop Harry into an Overlord.
I must ask though...
Who will be Harry's mistress?
And if you still need a Beta then I would be more than willing to help as I do have knowladge of writing a Dark Harry from reading other stories. I am also fairly familiar with the plot of Overlord.
I hope you enjoy writing this fic, as much as I enjoyed reading it.
Author's responseAs far as I have things planned, the Mistresses will be Luna Lovegood, Fleur Delacour,and that Hermione Granger. I already have a beta, though I appreciate the offer, and you can rest knowing that Harry's evil transformation will take quite some time. He will become Evil by the end, though.
(#) twistyguru 2011-06-05 11:46:35 AMOMG, I just made the connection to the Video Game 'OVERLORD'!
I love that game, especially when the minions run back with loot screaming 'For You...!'.
Oh, this could be fun, indeed.
I have this vision of Voldie and the DEs getting overrun by minions while Harry watches and laughs....
(#) Lydia_Hood 2011-09-27 05:35:48 PMInteresting story, I mean that Harry don't snap and turn into what I would call a "lesser" Evil is something which is just too surprising most of the time. I mean I am not THAT bad in life but if I went thru only a fraction of what Harry does I would snap, anyhow good story, keep on writing!