- Urgh, that's awful. Sheeut. Reasons why drugs are bad, Reinforcement No. Ten Thousand. I hope that something improves, but the number one rule of fiction probably negates that. Nice time expansion, by the way, with Mikey's comment. Subtle, but it clears it up some.
- If you killed Bandit I am sorry but I think I am going to have to slap you across the interwebs. I wan to see her and Frank play Godzilla! Goddamn it so much I need to know what's going to happen as soon as I read that last line! Keep it up I am completely addicted to this story!
(#) annabel-lee 2011-04-16Gerard, WHY THE F*CK WOULD YOU LEAVE BANDIT WITH LINDSEY?!? I'm sorry but I think that was completely called for. Why would you let Gerard do that? You killed Bandit!!! Sorry I got a little worked up there. The story is great. But why-how-Never mind I dont even know what I'm trying to say. PLEASE bring back Bandit.
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