(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-04-12SHIROGANE-SAN!!!
sorry. i had to do that. Geez laura, that was so good! lee does remind me VERY strongly of kia though, and gerard reminds me of shirogane :D but great writing, great dialogue and fantastic idea. update or i will free sid.
Author's responseahaaaa shirogane eh? that's not because he's like shirogane. it's because your obsessed :P
yeah, i was reading back and thinking "ooh shit this is so kia" but then lee isnt as epic as kia, so we're cool. DON'T FREE SID!
(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-04-12You delated Keep Running? Failure. I was sad. If the writing is good and the story is good then you should always keep writing, no matter if no one reads it.
There is no other word for it. This story is awesome. The writing is decent again, you adjust your style very well in order to write from a teenage girl's POV. It's a very original idea as well. Promise me you'll stay the course with this one, I want to watch it grow!
Author's responseI know, I felt a bit like a sell out when I deleted it, but I guess I just feel like I'll enjoy writing this one so much more.
Awsome, eh? Thanks so much, it means a lot coming from you! (No offence intended). Thanks so much for reviewing and, once again, sorry about keep running. Cheers :)
(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-04-12Goddammit, I'm being way too nice today. Must be a getting older thing. Anyway, I'm going to be a bitch and point out grammar. And spelling. And stupid things like that. I don't think an hour and a half can be sadistic. There were a few other things but believe it or not I can't remember them. In fact, there was hardly anything wrong with this fic. That didn't make me feel any better at all.
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