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6 ReviewsBob tries to ease Claire's concerns but Frank has concerns of his own.
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Forever and Ever
(#) xxMloewxx 2011-04-17 08:14:15 AM
You got me worried there for a while when Claire was talking to Bob's sister! I thaught and now she's gonna act like a bitch! :S but I'm glad she isn't a bitch!
Frank should not be so spicious about Anna! I know he doesn't mean to hurt her and just wants to help Gerard but still... What if he finds out? He's gonna be in danger! :(
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Forever and Ever
(#) shortygirl 2011-04-17 11:54:40 AM
Frank is gonna get himself in trouble...i thought his sister was gonna be bitch but im glad she isn't
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(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2011-04-17 02:44:16 PM
this is getting so very, very good!!
i was scared for Claire for a second their with Bob's sister. phew, haha.
Frankie has always (very rightly) had the Anna 'niggle'.
i thought i had reviewed the last chapter, but it's not shown up. sorry bout that. can't wait for more Missus!
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(#) andreajp 2011-04-24 01:58:46 AM
Man my eyes sting. I read all of these chapter up to this in two days on my phone. If I go blind I am blaming you! Anywho it is 4:41 in New Jersey and I have to be up at 9 tomorrow.... worth it!
okay now on to some actual reviewing. I really like the way that you make everyone talk how they should. Gerard says ain't and slang a lot, not to mention fuck. Jacob, Anna, and Claire who where all raised together speak the same. I can tell without reading who said what without looking because of what they said, which shows an amazing writing ability! When Claire and Anna said there first curses I was just as shocked as them. Plus I don't know how the hell you can write do not like that all the time. That shit would drive me crazy! I love my contraction!
I love these types of fan fiction. I hate short ones, a lot of these stories have good idea's, but most of them seem to rush the story to please readers to much. I mean you did try and turn the story into something lame by making Gerard fall in love with her, with no questions ask, you had them develop a true relationship. I can always tell when I am reading a great story if I have a dream about it. I had one about Anna being a Soiled Dove and Jacob saving her (I had some others, but I am pretty sure it had something to do with all those x warnings too ^_^). Sorry I didn't review every chapter, I just didn't want to stop reading, but now, my ass is almost to the end of the already updated chapters. I know I am going to be pulling my hair out until you update every damn time.
I hope some of that made sense.
Oh and if you couldn't tell from that review I love to ramble on and on.... and on.
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