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Gerard

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Gerard explains his past about frankie

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2011/04/18 - Updated: 2011/04/18 - 594 words

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  • Ashington

    (#) perfectzombie 2011-04-18 10:44:57 AM

    Right, I think the storyline is really good and I really would like you to keep writing it, but, I think you shouldn't rush into things. It kind of seems like that's what your doing, you should drag things out a bit more to give it more tension but don't drag it out for too long (then it just gets boring) and make the chapters longer, but other than that, it's really good(: (OH and another thing, did Gerard bite Frank or Mikey?:S that bit confused me!)

    Author's response

    i am trying to make the chapters longer and he bit frank :) i had to show the story from gerards point which may of seemed rushed to anounce the whole vampire thing but its really a tiny bit of the story, thanks for the reveiw and i will try and make the chapters longer, katt x
  • Ashington

    (#) rainbow_apocalypse 2011-04-20 01:59:28 AM

    OMG so what whos the vampire i know gerard is but is mikey what i am cofused!!! it really good xx

    Author's response

    It's Frank, Gerard left mikey cause he turned Frank =S I should of made that clearer lol

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