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Cherry Tree

He sniffed and shrugged. “No,” he replied. “I used my supernatural powers and walked through the walls.”

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2011/04/23 - Updated: 2011/04/23 - 1716 words - Complete

Reviews

• Welcome to the Black

  (#) xomcrxo 2011-04-23 08:40:09 AM

  This chapter was interesting, i really liked it :) keep up the good work and update soon ;D
  
  xoZAZxo

  Author's response

  Thanks, I'm glad you didn't find it as boring as I did!

• Welcome to the Black

  (#) Bad_Romance 2011-04-23 02:07:45 PM

  really enjoyed this chapter :) things are moving on with her and gerard :) x

  Author's response

  Yeah I really didn't want it to move both too quickly or too slowly, but you'll just have to see what happens NEXT chapter ;)

• Welcome to the Black

  (#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-04-24 01:45:33 AM

  No lie-ins does indeed make Party Pooper a moody killjoy. trust ME.
  
  N'aaaw indeed. that chapter was sweeter than a jammy doughnut. aw, I like Frank now. And gerard. Geez kid, why couldn't you just make one of them a prick? huh? HUH?
  
  Update. Soon.

  Author's response

  If I made one of them a prick that would be STOOPID.
  
  I will. Soon.

• Welcome to the Black

  (#) Elisabeth 2011-04-24 07:12:21 PM

  Ooooooh i want more.

• Welcome to the Black

  (#) Kid_Vicous 2011-04-25 11:16:18 AM

  This story makes me "'Naaaw" and giggle in a very sad, teenage girl who doesn't get out much sort of way.
  
  Good going.
  
  One thing. You don't want to make this story go too fast but you don't want it too slow either. You're doing good at the moment but if I were you I'd maybe pick up the pace a little bit.
  
  

  Author's response

  Don't worry, I know exactly what you mean by that and I've decided to make my chapters longer and more eventful now.
  
  Thanks Vicious.

• Welcome to the Black

  (#) ToxicLove 2011-04-29 06:05:44 PM

  Wow this is awesome! You should keep writing it's really really good!

  Author's response

  Thanks so much. Don't worry, I'm not done yet! Next chapter up soonish.

• Welcome to the Black

  (#) bringthebedlam 2011-04-30 03:11:15 PM

  I'm really liking where this is going. You have a great writing style. Very blunt, kind of crass, but also surprisingly refreshing. :) I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

• Welcome to the Black

  (#) Whovian-lily404 2011-08-24 02:42:47 AM

  awww, poor Mikey... I wonder what happened to happened to cause the fire...

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