This...this isn't right. So much.....Can't think,....just can't think
(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-05-17 11:05:55 PMWhoo! I'm KV!
No YOU are such a dear. Because this story has gone beyond my teaching. You may have noticed that I haven't really been reviewing it recently and that's because...well...there's nothing really that I can say anymore. The characters, plot, dialogue, description, narration, gramar, spelling, everything's perfect. So I left for a while saying "the student has become the master" to myself. Then I realised that I wanted to read the end.
Very, very well done. You've really improved from the first chapter and produced an incredibly creative, original and well-written fic. I would type out a packet of cookies but my keyboard might break so have one. (:.')