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Chapter Twenty Three

by CosmicZombie 19 Reviews

Death by moose, unexpected unconsciousness, and determination....

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Humor,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way - Published: 2011/05/03 - Updated: 2011/05/05 - 2653 words

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  • "You'll never fit in much, kid."

    (#) Lizzeh 2011-05-03 10:03:30 AM

    AWESOME! AWESOME! AWESOME! that was such a great chapter! you should update more often ;)
  • "You'll never fit in much, kid."

    (#) imdisenchanted 2011-05-03 10:22:44 AM

    NO NO NO NO don't give up on it! if anything the writing is getting better. just. don't give up on it, it's great c:
  • "You'll never fit in much, kid."

    (#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-05-03 10:26:14 AM

    what did you just say downhill WTF!!!
    MAN if i had your writing skills i would be loving it :D your soo amazing i need your skills your so adept with english, may i ask how long you have been writing for? i have only been writing since half of 2010 , i need more work lol

    Anyway enough of my jelouseness XD that sounds like jelly haha ... umm anyway i really do love this, although a ot doesnt happen the mod is fitted perfectly and your style of writing is amazing you are amazing did i tell you that?
    lol
    this is really my fave story no joke i love it soo much i think bee is epic to XD hehe mikey and bee suit and i cannot wait for the frerardness to happen hehe
    keep up the rad work, your my inspiration :p
    choawwi chaz
    chazom
    xx
  • "You'll never fit in much, kid."

    (#) killjoy_blackrose 2011-05-03 10:46:40 AM

    what?! downhill? give up? NO WAY
    this story is one of the best i ever read and therefore i will murder you if you quit!.....wait then you can't write either:/ damnxD
    but please continue you are an amazing writer! seriously you should consider doing it as a job you would be a billionare:)
    xx k
  • "You'll never fit in much, kid."

    (#) Keep-it-Ugly 2011-05-03 12:11:01 PM

    It is NOT going down hill. Please please PLEASE keep writing this story! Please? Well... I said please so hopefully you'll at least consider continuing... Oh, and Bee's right, Gerard is being a major drama queen. But that's just his personality, it's nothing that can be changed. :)
  • "You'll never fit in much, kid."

    (#) perfectzombie 2011-05-03 12:43:35 PM

    YOU.ARE.NOT.GIVING.UP.AND.YOUR.WRITING.IS.AMAZING. kapeesh!? Anyway, I loved this chapter and YOU. HAVE. TO. UPDATE. SOON. pleeeease i cant wait :'( your driving me insane here! I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES and can you update with the venomous kiss you gave me im killing loneliness? xD (I LOVE THAT SONG BTW GOOD CHOICE WOO!)
  • "You'll never fit in much, kid."

    (#) Mcrfan789 2011-05-03 01:31:23 PM

    Don't give up on this story! I think it's great. Anyways update soon.
  • "You'll never fit in much, kid."

    (#) MCRfan4life 2011-05-03 03:30:56 PM

    This is one of the best stories I've read. DON'T GIVE UP ON IT. I love it. :3
  • "You'll never fit in much, kid."

    (#) jadesohma 2011-05-03 03:56:02 PM

    I love Bee! She is amazing! LOVED IT:D

    ~JS~
  • "You'll never fit in much, kid."

    (#) MyBloodyTearsFall 2011-05-03 04:20:43 PM

    Don't give up! This story is better than lots of books in stores! Its seriously my favorite. I love you attention to details. Really good work. Please update soon!

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