Just gonna give you guys a few options and I would love it if you gave me your opinions.
(#) dancingdragon 2011-05-10 07:18:00 PMI jst started reading it and I think this story is amazing! im not very creative,but reading this story,I could tell you are.write what YOU think is best,your a very talented author.
Author's responseThank you so much! That really means a lot to me. I don`t know whether I agree with you but...
(#) Miss_Saint_Jimmy 2011-05-10 07:31:54 PMI think flashbacks are a fantastic idea! I also think it should end happy, not sad like Frerard stories have a nasty habit of doing... But not obnoxiously sugar-coated rainbows happy. Ya know?! Anywho, love the story, I'm very fond of your writing style, and please continue! :3
(#) rainbow_apocalypse 2011-05-12 09:44:03 AMhey
love you story it awesome whatever you think is best!! but i get piss if the wife get a pov but something about the kids would be cool and the media would be cool maybe.
happy end would be awesome
but what ever you think
(#) xxXLadyOfSorrowsXxx 2011-05-12 12:28:35 PMDO. NOT. QUIT. do what YOU think is best. it's your story, your imagination. your an amazing writer and i definetly will love anything you write. (: xx
Author's responseOh, thank you so so so much! I`m so glad you like my stories.