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Harry's Decision

by JLawrence_Kenny 7 Reviews

Harry faces a decision - one that goes against everything he knows.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Fantasy,Humor - Characters: Harry - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2011/05/11 - Updated: 2011/05/12 - 2244 words

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  • Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

    (#) Wtdra 2011-05-11 07:55:16 PM

    I think the Minions mounts should be some kind of rat like creature for land and possibly so bat like lizzard for air?
  • Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

    (#) Wtdra 2011-05-11 07:55:16 PM

    I think the Minions mounts should be some kind of rat like creature for land and possibly so bat like lizzard for air?
  • Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

    (#) Razgriz03 2011-05-12 01:48:19 AM

    why would those black minions need mounts?
    they should be stealthy not charging to the enemies LotR-like..
    the blue minions.. I like Wtdra's suggestion.. XD
  • Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

    (#) GrantLarceny 2011-05-13 10:17:18 AM

    sure give them mounts...only modern like transformers
  • Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

    (#) lycus 2011-05-13 10:35:24 AM

    They don't need mounts, Just make the fast and be ingnored like people do to house elves. And thanks for the longer chapter, you did great at giving information and setting up more scenes that can be turned into a omake.
  • Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

    (#) DragonWing 2011-05-14 02:00:24 PM

    Very nice. I can easily see Harry slowly getting corrupted by the power of the Overlord (wonderful games) as he grows more and more desperate to defeat Voldemort, that by the time that happens, Harry is even more evil than Voldemort is. And one thing about evil is, people who are evil rarely think of themselves as evil. They see their actions as a means to a glorious or noble end. They grow disconnected to the world around them.

    As for the blue mounts, I think it should be something amphibious. Some kind of snapping turtle maybe. Rolling around in their shells behind the other minions, reviving them in passing.

    As for the black minions, I like. Maybe their mounts could be something like Skaven from Warhammer, disgusting mutated ratlike creatures in the sewers. Skaven are remarkably cunning and dangerous, but I wouldn't think of them as particularly smart. Smart as the average minion at any rate.

    Will Harry like have one or two mistresses from every house in Hogwarts?

    Author's response

    Thanks for the reviews. As for the mistresses, the current plan includes Hermione, Luna, and Fleur. Might change as the story grows, though.
  • Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

    (#) dreadme 2012-02-20 04:29:47 PM

    i think miniture threstrals would be kinda cool

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