A Frerard: Frank is tortured by his claustrophobia but is the light his only escape or perhaps the raven haired boy he talks to in the forest clearing every morning
(#) MyBloodyTearsFall 2011-05-21 10:24:38 AMI didn't understand a couple parts, but mainly,is Gerard real or is Frankie just imagining him as well?
Other than that, your writing is very desciptive and well-thought-out. Good Job. I could picture myself watching these two guys perfectly, like in a movie. Very Nice.
Author's responseThanks :) when I wrote it Gerard wasn't real and it was franks imaginary friend to keep him safe but I like readers to have their own interpreatations too :)
(#) monstrice901 2011-10-16 12:25:36 PMThis was really good actually, considering how short it was. You crammed a lot of detail in. Like the last review, I was wondering whether Gee was real or not! Anyway it's very good :D
Author's responseThank you very much :) and when I was writing it Gee wasn't real but I like readers to have their own interpretations, even I have had about ten other ideas about Gee and Frank in this story since I wrote it