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The Reading

by Hawklan 4 Reviews

The reading of Sirius Black's will and it's aftermath.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Crossover - Characters: Harry - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2011/06/01 - Updated: 2011/06/01 - 2786 words - Complete

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  • The Reading

    (#) Darkmark66 2011-06-01 01:09:39 PM

    Very good I never liked Albus him bashed is always good and after that line about Harry coming out from his cuboard I just wanted Harry to punch or kill him. I thought Albus did more harm to Harry than the Dark Lord who wanted Harry dead Albus wanted him to suffer then die when the time was right.

    I hope the Weasley's get bashed a bit too as they are blind followers of Albus and I hate Ron.

    A great twist for the Head of the Black family.

    Firenze was a really nice idea.

    I hope the Dursley's suffer.

    I look forward to what will happen next.
  • The Reading

    (#) dennisud 2011-06-01 03:08:13 PM

    Good start, clearly you want Hermione close to Harry and the hints are there as to how close. Kitty's a good ACC but fill out her background more as you go.
    I can already see Dumbles try to get things his way but "Madam" Bones, Head of the DMLE should be able to handle him! Oh and remember Luna Lovegood's a good catalytic character! Use here here to help Harry!

    dennisud
  • The Reading

    (#) jabarber69 2011-06-01 03:24:00 PM

    okay you got my interest, who is this new head of black....????

    also the bit about firenze was way cool, go Padfoot!!!!
  • The Reading

    (#) Cateagle 2011-06-01 05:59:08 PM

    Som very nice bits here and I hope to see a sequel where the new head of House Black gets named and he and Harry compare notes and start cooperating; especially if they also involve House Longbottom and House Bones in their efforts.

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