High school graduates Ray and Gerard move to a small town in South California with Mikey and Frank to help them get a new start. 2nd day there they meet Delilah an awkward girl who they find intere...
- Great! In my alert's fo sure! Check out my stories if you gotta chance? Seriously! PLEASE! AND PLEASE UPDATE!
Author's responseAww I'm flattered! I'm glad you like it, it's my first so yeah.... anyways, I'll check your stories out some time and I'll be sure to update soon! :D
(#) imjustagirlnotahero 2011-06-19 05:56:29 PMEli, I love your story because it's honet about what's happening. It's not just people falling in love (well, nevermind there's some parts but I'm sure not all), it's about what really happens to us in life. Your writing makes simple events so much more complex and interesting to read. The more of what happens, the more interesting it gets. And with every word, people hang on tighter and tighter to what you are saying. It's not just some random story you pulled off the top of your head like mine and just keep the events going with something you just thought about like mine. Yours is based on something, which gives you so much more to go on, which makes your story a hundred times better than anything anyone could come up with. Your's is unique and could never be anything other than what you have and are making of it. That's what makes it special and that's what makes it as amazing as I say it is.
Author's responseaskljhfkghja I LOVE YOU. Thank you, I just guess not only is this for fun but this a way to let go of how I'm feeling about all of this. About y'know leaving. It sucks. So I guess it's my therapy. I'm glad you like it Amber