Driving into the small town of Calipatria Gerard, Ray, Frank, and Mikey realize just how far from Jersey they've come.
- I'm liking it so far. I also like the fact that they are all the right ages. This sounds like it can be a good story, perfect chapter length, I prefer 1000+ chapters because you can add detail which you also did a good job. I feel like I'm melting from the imaginary heat. Looking forward to reading more of this and to see where it's going to go. Just be forewarned, I love to ramble as you can possibly tell already ^_^
Author's responseI'm glad you like it! I'm glad you like the detail, I always write like that so it came easy. And it's okay to ramble I do the same :) btw, the girl who wrote Mikey's Here is actually one of my best friends who lives in the town I do x)
anyways! A new one will be up soon, promise :)