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Fourteen: Photographs

by writingechelon 5 Reviews

A photograph doesn't show you the pain, nor the loss.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2011/07/07 - Updated: 2011/07/07 - 652 words - Complete

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  • Never Coming Home

    (#) PandaFrankie 2011-07-13 09:18:22 AM

    Wow.
    Just... WOW.
    I love this.
    This story, it's... it's brilliant.
    I can't believe no one thought of this before! Frerard based on the Ghost Of You video. It is PERFECT :D I love it. The way you describe everyone, the pain and the agony Gerard and Frank and Ray and Mikey suffer, it's just brutal. There are a few things thy annoyed me... little things. Like the fact that you didn't really get into describing vital points of the story. For example, Frank and Gerard having sex for the first time, or Mikey dying, and Alicia's loss. Those things. Little things, I assure you.
    Also, just wondering as I only finished reading this yesterday, is this the final chapter? Or will there be more? I can't tell because it was only updated on Thursday. If this isn't the end, please update it soon, I'd love to read more of this! :D xo

    Author's response

    Your review made me so, so proud, if I may say so myself.
    Honest feedback like yours is always great to get, it always helps one grow.
    And I didn't feel all that comfortable in describing the sex scene - not yet at least - mainly because of some personal experiences I am still "processing" . Believe me, Alicia's loss will have an ENORMOUS place in the second part of this story, so stay tuned! :)
    -xo J.
  • Never Coming Home

    (#) PandaFrankie 2011-07-13 11:21:10 AM

    Aaaw, thanks :3 It's nice to hear that. I love reviewing stories. I seem like a bitch sometimes though and I always worry about that :L I suppose you do need to be honest sometimes.
    Oh, it's okay, if it's a matter of comfort, I completely understand. I feel really awkward about writing sex scenes in detail. I remember one time my friend Edith and I were roleplaying Frerard for the first time, and neither of us knew what to say, it was hilarious XD
    lakdjfpqjrfnodlqnd YAYYY! I got so worried the story was over :'3 I can't wait to see how it pans out. I feel so sorry for Frankie- I can see that when he says he loves Gerard AND Jamia, that he really does mean it.
    Also, can I just say something?
    "The twins would never know their daddy."
    THAT WILL NEVER NOT TUG AT MY HEARTSTRINGS. You have such a way with emotions! -C xo

    Author's response

    You are really too sweet! :3
    Also, in case you didn't notice, chapter 15 is up for your enjoyment.
    -xo J
  • Never Coming Home

    (#) PandaFrankie 2011-07-16 05:31:47 PM

    -fangirling-
    I'm on holiday and my wifi isn't great so I don't always get updates. I shallmread it now, though :D -C
  • Never Coming Home

    (#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-10-12 10:53:51 PM

    I love this fic so much, it's so sad and beautifully written. Is Alicia going to commit suicide now? Depressing...

    SF
  • Never Coming Home

    (#) patdfan01 2011-12-05 11:00:53 PM

    I love this! Oh and I also like how you put Ryan Ross in here too! But i like this story more than the way you put RyRo. Wait! I meant that in a good way! Haha i said WAY! Lol

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