Freya has a strange reunion; Amarant has a strange sense of humor. (Vignette)
(#) Myshu 2006-06-03
Ventriloquism... how novel, ser.
The conflict is introduced and resolved with a very light brush, though the dialogue is nice and snappy, good for a shortie. Amarant's attitude towards the festival made me gigglesnort, and your Freya is ever-perfect. I approve!
:D Wow, this is awesome. I'm a pretty big fan of Freya/Amarant when it's done well, in any capacity (friend, lover, rivals, you know the generalizations), and I have to say this is really spot on. I have trouble writing Freya for some god-awful reason but you obviously don't. Yeah, I would make this more concrit but I really can't think of anything to nitpick. Go you.
So maybe this wasn't your original plan, but I actually really like it. It just seems very in character to me; Amarant being beligerent just for the sake of being beligerent when it's blatantly obvious how he really feels.
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