(#) DeathzAngel 2011-07-22This is absolutely amazing. I love the story so far and can't wait to see what's gonna happen with the whole baby/Sun/Party/Fun/sister thing. Haha. Please update soon.
Author's responseAw thank you! Yeah, the Neon Poison (A's I call the gee/sun pairing) and the Fun Sun (take a wild guess what pair that is) will get much more complicated. I feel it's a bit too perfect right now, but im working on it.
Something wicked this way comes....
(#) RyanCyanideKiller 2011-07-22Ok, I love you, but you should know that already yeah? If not, then you know it now. but... I thought this was a new chapter!
Author's responseAW! I love you too Ryan! You'll get your new chapter, the second I clear it with my editor!
the future is bulletproof (unlike humans)
(#) CantFindTheWay 2011-07-23OOOOH! Clues! MIKEY LIKEY!
Okay, so far I'm loving your work! I wasn't able to read it this week until now because of stupid homeworks, so I just gave it up for awhile. But anyways, ME GUSTA. I'm imagining right now what would happen with the whole thing....very suspicious....
PLEASE DON'T SAY THAT SOMEONE WOULD DIE, 'CAUSE I SEE THAT THE FUTURE IS BULLETPROOF UNLIKE HUMANS AND IT SOUNDS LIKE SOMEONE'S GOING TO DIE! (Sorry for the paranoia.) I'd die for anyone in the story, though.
Author's responseGood to know that you read it still! I really love your reviews, they make me smile!
Love means sacrafice.
- Love it so far! I want to see more tradgey though xD I can't wait to see myself in it, even if its small (please don't let it be small though puppy eyes) I can't wait to read the rest!
Author's responseyells to cooks in the back they want more drama! On the double! Your order will be right up Apocalyto :) I'll throw you a bne, give you some lyrics to stew over.
"Lather the blood on your hands Romeo."
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