Andrea and Leighton's POV Andera's first then Leighton's
- DUDE I wanted Leighton to be my best friend, I got that PLUS she's my sister?! I fucking love you! You got me down perfectly, I've even done that gesture to my best friend when she was talking to a guy she liked. I am a huge perv lol god I can't wait until Frank comes over! You know me being the awesome big sister that I am, I'm going to do my best to tease the shit out of her in front of him. I do that in front of my big brother girl friend all the time, favorite thing I told her was he sucked his thumb and twirled his hair until he was 9, she said awe and he looked like he was trying to set my hair on fire lol sorry I ramble all the time to you but I like you so you get the rambles! Can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
I miss my Bobert already :'(
- Very nice.....I like the attention you pay to the details, like hair, clothes, etc. It helps the reader in visualising the scene. Whats also great is that you add these details discreetly so that it doesn't seem amature. I want to see what this builds up to.