"Gerard felt as though he could bare it at first, but with each hit, the pain stung more and more."
i feel whenever you write a short/less gruesome torture, the next one always seems to be horrific and makes me squirm. short chapters for anyone following this are effectively good :)
(#) Torogirl15 2011-08-04 10:59:46 PM
One word: brilliant. When you said he'd been rescued, and then he woke up, it felt like I'd been punched in the chest, I was so surprised. Beautiful. Just beautiful.
oh my god, poor gee! i know it was on the chapter before, but when he was rescued, i was so happy. then it was a dream, and i swear i almost cried. poor poor poor gerard! this story is so brilliant though :D
- kirrah xx
p.s. update soon?
(#) VanJA212 2011-08-05 11:18:49 AM
This chapter was truely awesome. But still, poor Gee. I don't know why they're doing this to him.
But i'm really excited for the next, more gruesome chapter. Though this one was pretty gruesome as well.
Update soon please :)
This is sad. its making me cryy!!! D: poor Gee...i wanna know what happens next...but i don't!! D: actually i do...
(#) xXLaylaxX 2011-08-07 12:35:11 AM
I have absoulutly no idea what the next chapter is about lol. Is it bad that I love this story SO much? Anyways, UPDAATE SOON!