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Breaking Out, Breaking Down

by AleashaJadee 2 Reviews

Wise words from Frank. (It's a bit shit but w/e)

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Angst,Humor - Characters: Frank Iero - Warnings: [!] [V] - Published: 2011/08/05 - Updated: 2011/08/05 - 1250 words - Complete

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  • Reckless & Relentless

    (#) japulapu 2011-08-05 10:07:28 PM

    I know it's very hard to write dialouge. But as a reader, dialouge is fresh and easier to read after a paragraph of description. Dialouge is hard no to make awkward. Very often it sounds forced or unnatural. But you are doing a good job of it.

    Author's response

    Again, thank you. I'm trying to get past the dialogue barrier that I have and I found the dialogue in this chapter was easier to write than normal.
  • Reckless & Relentless

    (#) midnightblackparade 2011-08-07 08:36:51 AM

    Really good keep it up :)

    Author's response

    Thank you! I'll try to update soon but I'm having some trouble with chapter 3 so I'm just giving it a couple of days to think about it :]
    Thank you again, it means a lot.

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