"Gerard resumed his position and tried his best to stay still. But the smoke was too much."
eww the thing with the blood and the mucus... just ew. i wanna say great chapter but that makes me sound very evil. mwhahaha >:)
Wow. Poor Gee :( i can't even right now.....
Just out of curiosity, are you ever going to reveal why they're doing this to him??
(#) abbi229 2011-08-10 05:18:25 PM
i hope gerard has learnt a lesson bout smoking!
but still poor gee
Update soon X)
that was awful :( poor gee :( :( :(
you should update soon :3
- kirrah xx
(#) xXLaylaxX 2011-08-10 06:49:42 PM
I have a couple of ideas for some chapters, you can use them if you want to ya dont havta ;).
-Lemonboarding (simliar to waterboarding but you use lemonade or lemonjuice instead of water and it burns like hell its 10x worse)
-Waxing (I know woman do this alot but men usually don't and it would be a new level of pain for them, also if its in sensitive areas it really hurts)
(#) xXLaylaxX 2011-08-10 06:50:08 PM
Oh and for the next chapter, are you going to freeze him?
Wow this is amazing!!! keep up the good work and update soon:)
(#) Deirdre 2011-08-12 12:28:19 AM
Oh this is so gruesome!
I like it :)
(#) VanJA212 2011-08-21 10:41:47 AM
Eww that was horrible! Poor, poor Gerard :/
But this story is so awesome :D