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Frank's House

by PineappleExpress 5 Reviews

Gerard and Mikey go meet up with Frank and Ray at Frank's house. More flashbacks...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama,Horror - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2011/08/11 - Updated: 2011/08/11 - 1149 words

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  • The Memories That Haunt Me

    (#) AppleButter 2011-08-11 09:48:44 AM

    UPDATE!!!!(:

    Author's response

    Ok!
  • The Memories That Haunt Me

    (#) Danger-Taco-Freak 2011-08-11 10:06:43 AM

    I think you're story so far is awesome : DD how you've described Gee and Frank in the last chapter as 'brothers', is how one of my best trends and myself are. But girls, not dudes. XDD

    Author's response

    Haha thank you!
  • The Memories That Haunt Me

    (#) -TheGhostOfYou- 2011-08-15 08:05:31 PM

    I actually like this story, it's got a pretty cool storyline. I do have one question though, in the first summary it says that Gerard was a teenager facing these reoccurring flashbacks, and then in this chapter it said something about the 'tour ending'. So are they famous in this story, or no? Just curious. But anyway, keep up the good work!

    Author's response

    Thanks... And yes, they are famous. Sorry if I did not make myself very clear. I may have made a typo.
  • The Memories That Haunt Me

    (#) FTWWW 2011-08-19 04:37:20 AM

    This is a really interesting plot, but to be honest I don't like your writing style. The pacing isn't very good, or the vocabulary. Some of the reactions are a bit out of character too, and some of the sentences don't make much sense.
    By all means, continue, this is a very interesting plot. But maybe get a beta to help you with some of the little things?
  • The Memories That Haunt Me

    (#) EmoLove22 2011-09-12 05:39:47 PM

    Continue plzz!

    Author's response

    I'm not sure. Because I haven't had time at all to work on it and I'm deciding on how to continue it although I have what I want planned out already..

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