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These violent delights.

Gerard finds himself in a bigger hole, and there's even more questions.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Published: 2011/08/12 - Updated: 2011/08/12 - 1379 words

Reviews

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) japulapu 2011-08-12 08:53:07 AM

  yes, i guess the tiredness explains the few grammar slip ups. But they were very few and weren't really a big deal. Well no one saw that anti-climax coming did they? It was an interesting chapter, you played a clever trick, by saying Frank knew what Gerard did, and you came so close to give all the answers, but just turned the entire thing around by Frank saying what he did. That was good work. It doesn't look like you're playing for time, just building up the suspense. Great work.

  Author's response

  Well yeah, haha. Tiredness does that.
  
  I'm glad you think so, I like to build suspense and have people wondering. :)

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-08-13 07:19:08 AM

  i need another chapter, this is killing me!!! i love it so much, i just wish i knew what was going on. i really thought Frank would tell him then. update soon :D

  Author's response

  Awh thanks! i'm glad you like it.. I'm also glad I teased you x)

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) VanJA212 2011-08-15 11:39:03 AM

  Omg! I feel like answers are close and it's about time too! :D
  Can't wait to read more :)

  Author's response

  haha, yes they are!

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