Harry may just have figured out his life and where he is going. Please review if this should continue.
after the first three chapters the fourth I feel fell short.
(#) rb8 2011-08-19
Chapters 2, 3, and 4 were excellent and could easily be expanded into their own stories.
I thought chapter 1 was not as strong, and that particular crossover has been done several times already.
An interesting way to train up Harry, possibly unique, at least not one I've seen before.
Hope this will be continued, I'm looking forward to seeing the other alternates.
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