With every breaking bone. Scream until you lose your voice. Scream until you lose everything.
(#) PartyPoison 2011-08-12 10:58:46 PMThis story does intrigue me. Something different.
It’s hard to choose a favourite of your stories. They are all completely stunning in their own way. I enjoy not knowing what story to expect another chapter from. It makes it that much better when you add a chapter to one that hasn’t been updated for awhile. Just do whatever seems easiest to write I suppose.
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2011-08-18 09:15:02 PMI really enjoyed the first chapter and I'm excited to continue reading. I hope you'll continue.
I love the darkness in this story and it's very unique.
Only thing I saw was this, "He walked outside of the cage, closing and looking the prison like cell."
Did you mean locking?
Other than that... Spectacular!