Nothing ever goes according to plan.
(#) MacheSalas 2011-09-07 02:32:41 PM
Sorry that I review so late, I was on vacation and of course I didnt had time for interner for 20 days so yeah! I guess the man she saw was Jay, just saying xD " im dissapointed" you bitch, thats even whorts (spelling?) than mad!! Jaja keep going
(#) Bleto 2011-09-29 07:03:03 PM
Your story is amazing, so original. I love the way you narrate everything, I can imagine every single detail thanks to your narration way. Keep it up. I can't wait for the next chapter and the next ones :P... I need to know what's going to happen between Mandy and Jared!!... Great work!! :D
(#) kiraluvsu 2011-10-04 06:52:02 PM
Love this story :)
I luv ur story, I couldn't put down my phone after reading the 1st chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep it coming :)