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I hope you're ready for a firefight, 'cause the Devil's got your number tonight!

Gerard is getting somewhat suspicious of Annelise, and the boys have a fight.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Published: 2011/08/21 - Updated: 2011/08/21 - 1414 words

Reviews

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-08-21 12:04:04 PM

  awesome chapter...WE ARE SO CLOSE TO KNOWING THE TRUTH!!
  
  hnjfhbfgn i.cannot.wait. The suspense is killing me.

  Author's response

  I know! There's only about 3/4 or 5 more chapters! D:
  
  Haha, still, I'm glad you're liking it :P

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) midnight_star22 2011-08-21 04:11:39 PM

  Aghh can't wait for the next chapter!!!

  Author's response

  eodhfopr thank you! It might take longer to update, but eh, whatever. I'll get it up sometime this week! x)

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) MyChemFreak 2011-08-21 05:59:59 PM

  Amber! Annalise scares me!:(
  But ohmygod were gonna find out what Gee did!:O yay!:3
  Excellent standard of work as usual m'dear:------)

  Author's response

  Aw! She shouldn't, she can just just be a bit of a bitch.. and be creepy.. XD
  
  Not just yet, but at the final chapter. ;)
  
  And thank you! Your chapter was good too, Catie. :)

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) japulapu 2011-08-23 09:40:54 AM

  The suspense fell drastically in this chapter. The same effect created in the previous chapters were lost. I think because it's long drawn out, but then again, the previous chapters were always something new to it and never let the mystery fall. I was a little disappointed with this chapter but am surprised that you will be able to finish it in another 5 chapters. But an author should be able to convey what they want in as little words as possible so I don't care how many words you say it in. Other than all that, a good chapter as usual, no slip-ups and a great ending which left an impact.

  Author's response

  Yeah, this chapter was focusing more on the relationships rather than the story line and suspense. :) I'm sorry to hear you were disappointed, but thank you for you're feedback!
  
  your*
  Yikes, slip up.

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) japulapu 2011-08-24 05:25:29 AM

  That's just one....

  Author's response

  Sorry? :S

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) VanJA212 2011-08-25 05:16:55 AM

  Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god! I'm sooo excited! We'll find out what Gerard did and i hope they don't get caught! :D

  Author's response

  Haha, I'm glad you're excited! Get pumped! Woo!

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) japulapu 2011-08-25 08:16:30 AM

  The slip up...

  Author's response

  Oh! XD

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