Gerard is getting somewhat suspicious of Annelise, and the boys have a fight.
(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-08-21 12:04:04 PMawesome chapter...WE ARE SO CLOSE TO KNOWING THE TRUTH!!
hnjfhbfgn i.cannot.wait. The suspense is killing me.
Author's responseI know! There's only about 3/4 or 5 more chapters! D:
Haha, still, I'm glad you're liking it :P
(#) MyChemFreak 2011-08-21 05:59:59 PMAmber! Annalise scares me!:(
But ohmygod were gonna find out what Gee did!:O yay!:3
Excellent standard of work as usual m'dear:------)
Author's responseAw! She shouldn't, she can just just be a bit of a bitch.. and be creepy.. XD
Not just yet, but at the final chapter. ;)
And thank you! Your chapter was good too, Catie. :)
- The suspense fell drastically in this chapter. The same effect created in the previous chapters were lost. I think because it's long drawn out, but then again, the previous chapters were always something new to it and never let the mystery fall. I was a little disappointed with this chapter but am surprised that you will be able to finish it in another 5 chapters. But an author should be able to convey what they want in as little words as possible so I don't care how many words you say it in. Other than all that, a good chapter as usual, no slip-ups and a great ending which left an impact.
Author's responseYeah, this chapter was focusing more on the relationships rather than the story line and suspense. :) I'm sorry to hear you were disappointed, but thank you for you're feedback!
Yikes, slip up.