Control yourself, take only what you need from it.
(#) ZombieSlayer13x 2011-08-23 02:27:13 PMI am absolutely in love with this story. Lornaigh captures love, action, drama, angst, sorrow, humor, gore, everything in this story perfectly.
She also has tons of kick-ass quotes.
I love the shouting match Gerard and Frank had. That was love right there. The perfect scene.
Well, that and the one where Gerard shoots the priest and exits with the line, "And may God bless you all."
It's a shame. Lornaigh could've been one successful writer. She was my favorite on here.
(#) AdnarimSmada 2011-08-23 02:43:44 PM1.) I enjoyed the antics between Gerard and Frank.
2.) I love how even Gerard can't avoid the IRS. I've stared right into that building on a trip to D.C with my dad back in 6th grade and everything is literally gray in there. It is awful, it is a bleak life. That's why those people are so mean.
3.) I must say I hate getting up for school as well. 6:00am for me as well. Ugh.
4.)Lornaigh, we could never hate you, even if that unfinished cliffhanger was extremely annoying.
5.) Oh, and you poor girl. People asking if you knew the Queen. Why are these idiots so dumb?!
- firstly, thank you jane for updating again this story is generally where i come to at such a time like 2;15 am due to what i asume is insomnia
lornaigh possibly wrote the best story ever, at least its the best one ive ever read and i dont think ive ever hated her for the cliffhangers, just been annoyed at them :)
i especially love lucinda, she is so cute and nice
update soon please
(#) Torogirl15 2011-08-23 11:23:23 PMThis is definitely the best fanfiction Ive ever read, and thats saying something considering I spend all my time tooling around on youtube and FF websites. Lornaigh has created a spellbinding story with intrigue, murder, delicious mansex, andwhat all stories need: Gerard Way messing around with Frank Iero. Please excuse my missppellings and occasionally fucked up grammar thiis time (DAMN YOU NOOK COLOR!!!!) and please review very soon.
Yours in Foreverville,