Harry and Liana attempt to get home...but problems arise.
(#) Shaggy37 2006-06-06 11:33:08 AM
awesome chapter, I loved it, do update a little bit sooner if possible, I can't wait for the next update:):)
(#) snowman 2006-06-06 02:01:18 PM
(#) rowinr 2006-06-06 04:34:47 PM
hey if anyone emails you a list of those stories please pass it onto me as well great story so far by the way.
AK-47 is an Assault Rifle,not a sub. That's it.
(#) named 2006-06-07 12:08:40 AM
(#) Binny 2006-06-07 12:56:15 AM
I liked this chapter, but Is liane's full name luciana or something? I don't think it was mentioned before this chapter...
Have you read any stories by apocalypso or vash_the_unholy? They write teh bombz stories. Mrriddler is awesome too.
(#) muyoka15 2006-06-07 11:27:26 PM
hey, great chapter. Although the relationship was rushed and the minor clishe of "absorbing knowledge" (which was kind of nessesary) this is a pretty awsome acion story. Please update soon.
This is an awesome story. I love it and desire more. Bravo!
(#) redquail3 2006-06-24 09:21:09 AM
prety good story if a little dry and lacking in filler content to make it read more of a story and less like an outline of a story.
as for other storys on fanfiction.net there are 2 story that you might like INDEPENDANCE DAY and HARRY POTTER AND HIS WITCHES are very good reads.
pretty good stuff, seemed a little wierd how quickly those two "fell in love" fight scene then instant romance? enjoyed the fight scenes but the rest seemed kinda chaotic or rambling at points like when he's explaining his background. who does that? like a script, unnatural. still pretty good tho. :P