- It was a sad end but almost perfect! He's not going to let the book see to Gerard?
So unexpected, Frank was in love with her.. Didn't see that coming! xD
Are you going to write another story? (A) I really loved this one!
Author's responseFrank wanted to keep the journal to himself to save anyone else the feelings it caused him and Cadence, so no, he wouldn't give it to Gee. And I'm really glad you liked it. I'm already working on the third chapter of the story I started postin about a month ago, so that's my current project.
(#) RebelAgainstTheEnemy 2011-09-04It definitely grew on me towards the end... and then she committed suicide. Way to make me feel like I hated on a character for tool long, Becca! But it was really good, especially with all of the personal emotions you put in there.
Author's responseGosh, A... thanks! I love it when you give me your opinion on stuff like this, bro.
(#) Gerard_inspires_me 2011-09-05okay... you didn't read me the very end bitch!! lol i freaking loved it though. i liked the little twist at the end :) I kinda wish you'd made it longer, but ish okay :) i loved too much to really care!!! :P
Author's responseYeeeshh... How could I read you the end if I was quite obviously still writing the suicide, dumbass? But thank you, and I love you anyway, though at this moment I really want to smother you with Pechlivanos... (I'm leaving that part up to your imagination)
(#) Vampirechick1159 2011-09-30Oh my....that was beautiful, but...suicide's never the answer! ;__; I'm gonna cry. I really am. That was amazing. I just wish she didn't do it. And whoaaaaa, what was that curveball with Frank!? Dang. Some guys have a really twisted way of showing their affection. I loved it. Write more. That was beautiful. One of my favorites on here, even if I hate that ending.
Author's responseAh, I was killing myself for killing Cadence, trust me. I hate just making a character do things like that, but when I started this story, it was originally Gerard that would die, so... you can see why either one would be hard. And the whole Frank thing just kind of happened, though I love it more than I probably should :)
(#) CypherDetonation 2012-01-09OMG so I was listening to this awesomely sad song called Sloe Burn by Atreyu while reading this, and they say in the chorus "I know that it's killing me" and I'm just like "omg psychic." Anyways, I'm surprised that I didn't bawl my eyes out. I absolutely loved this story. It was probably one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. Honestly, keep writing. You're amazing at writing.
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