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chapter three

The only word buzzing around in my head now was “Why?”

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2011/09/02 - Updated: 2011/09/02 - 1103 words

Reviews

• The Past Ain`t through with you

  (#) afabulouskilljoy 2011-09-02 07:33:57 AM

  awesome! xx

  Author's response

  awww...thank you. I`ll update soon
  xoxodakota

• The Past Ain`t through with you

  (#) TheGiinger 2011-09-02 11:25:57 AM

  I love the plot so much and the whole concept, but please remember to just proof read to avoid any little mistakes :)
  This is just constructive criticism, okay? Please don't be offended, but your audience isn't stupid, you don't need to explain every little detail. If you just said something like- 'Gerard's jaw dropped in astonishment'- the audience will understand that Frank's behaviour is unusual or out of character, there's no need for a sentence of explanation, okay? Occasionally, yes, but not all the time.
  
  God, I feel like a bitch. Please don't think I don't like your work, I love it, this is just an area to improve in :D
  
  xo

  Author's response

  I`m glad you like it, and I am in no way offended or anything and you are NOT being a bitch. (trust me, I know a bitch when I see one) Thanks for letting me know, I`ll work on it.
  xoxodakota

• The Past Ain`t through with you

  (#) midnight_star22 2011-09-04 03:01:54 PM

  This is definitely a unique story! Love it(:

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