(#) PartyPoison 2011-09-05It's okaii. I usually find little mistakes in my stories too when I am going through them. But then I am too tired to care and just can't be bothered to fix them.
This chapter was admirable, it truly was a touching thing to read. In fact this whole story has just been full of sad realisations that just because things get better for a moment, doesn't mean they'll stay that way. Well, that's what I think anyways. There's probably a lot more to it but I couldn't begin to explain it all in the state I am in at this moment(I literally feel like a zombie come back from the dead.) But you should know that this story is something I will probably never forget.
(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-09-06I kinda got the feel from the beginning of this story that this would be the outcome, but you do it so well i could never be prepared what i just read. Even from looking at the title of this chapter i literally felt my heart drop of course not in a negative way because i imagine that's what you want your reader's to feel. I'm going to miss this Fic it was amazing from end to finish but i know you've got loads of other stuff going so its all right. I think i may be rambling right now, but anyway i loved this with all of my little black heart. Your one of the best authors out there and i will always keep this story to reread, you should definitely feel proud.
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