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A fallen hero
3 ReviewsWhen its all over for Archie, how is Atlanta going to take it?An Archie and Atlanta Fan fiction.
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A fallen hero
(#) Elsask 2006-06-06 08:56:14 PM
that was really good, a different way of writing another a/a fanfic, i liked it personally.Author's response
Yea! Cheers! Thank you. -
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(#) heather 2006-06-07 03:15:19 AM
it was quite sad but kinda confusing.Author's response
Sorry that itr was confuseing. -
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(#) Arisey 2006-06-07 04:32:55 PM
All these tear-jerkers(in general, not just your story), they really don't make me cry. What is wrong with me? Feh, anyway, great job!Author's response
Man I want to be you. I cried writing about Archie getting hit in the arm with an arrow (Paris to say I love you). But then agian lots of things make me cry, exspecaily when they happen to other people. So nothings wrong with you. -
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(#) Kathrinewoot 2006-06-10 05:53:57 PM
I actually cried a bit at the end of this story! I can't help it. Archie and Atlanta are my OTP, so, this really WAS a tear-jerker. It was so detailed and thoughtful! Keep writing like this!Author's response
Cool. Thanks. Wow high praise. -
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(#) Stephanie 2006-06-11 08:41:56 AM
I loved the story but it was really sad.Author's response
Glad you liked it! -
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(#) Stephanie 2006-06-11 08:42:00 AM
I loved the story but it was really sad.Author's response
Glad you liked it! -
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(#) S.J. 2006-06-22 05:27:11 AM
It was good, maybe a little too detailed, but it had good emphasis on the character's strong point which is good in a sad story. Over alll I liked it! ( if you're wondering why I'm being so picky on story writing it's because my best subject is English and I have an award for story and novel writing!) hope this info helps!Author's response
Wow. YOu must be good. Glad you liked it, I have issues with getting the right amount of details, either to much or not enough. Happy that you took the time to review. -
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(#) Randog 2006-07-12 11:09:50 PM
awe...archie died. bit of a tear jerker yeah. i liked itAuthor's response
sweet glad you like it
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(#) kelseyANNE 2006-07-14 08:43:26 AM
i cried.
so sad, omg...
when she tried to say her final goodbyes...at the funeral... UGH, so sad.
well written m'dearAuthor's response
glad that it was well writen